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With reference to your advertisement in yesterday's "........." for
............................. I wish to apply for this job.
The position seems to fit very well with my education, experience, and
career interests
I have 2 years practical experience in IT sector. I still extend and
gain new theoretical knowledge from this range. During my studies I have
an opportunity to familiarize myself with many of programming techniques
(e.g. C, C++, Java, SQL) algorithmic and optimalizations .
I have strong background in modern computers and networking hardware,
various peripherals and electronic devices , as well as knowledge of
many operating system and office suites . My enclosed CV provides more
details on my qualifications
I'm very personable, flexible and well organized person with a "can do"
attitude, who likes to see project to completion.
Abilities such as analytical thinking, fast learning and accurate
conclusions should be very useful for a worker in a company like ..............
My background and career goals seem to match your job requirements
well. I am confident that I can perform the job effectively
Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing with you

Bede wdzieczny za wszelkie uwagi. List byl pisany w oparciu o gotowe juz
schematy...

do góry

jak dla mnie to kiepskie i pomijam bledy gramatyczne.

> With reference to your advertisement in yesterday's "........." for
> ............................. I wish to apply for this job.
nie wczorajsze tylko data konkretna, for the position of:

> The position seems to fit very well with my education, experience, and
> career interests
jak z przedszkola, wywalic w ogole

> I have 2 years practical experience in IT sector. I still extend and gain new
> theoretical knowledge from this range. During my studies I have an opportunity
> to familiarize myself with many of programming techniques (e.g. C, C++, Java,
> SQL) algorithmic and optimalizations .
powielona informacja z cv

> I have strong background in modern computers and networking hardware, various
> peripherals and electronic devices , as well as knowledge of many operating
> system and office suites . My enclosed CV provides more details on my
> qualifications
za ogolnie.

> I'm very personable, flexible and well organized person with a "can do"
> attitude, who likes to see project to completion.
> Abilities such as analytical thinking, fast learning and accurate conclusions
> should be very useful for a worker in a company like ..............
> My background and career goals seem to match your job requirements
> well. I am confident that I can perform the job effectively
> Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing with you
hehe wlasnie z takich przykladow sie najczesciej wysmiewa.

> Bede wdzieczny za wszelkie uwagi. List byl pisany w oparciu o gotowe juz
> schematy...
to widac

co zmienic:

podziel CL na konkretne akapity:
1. I would like to apply itd

2. dlaczego wlasnie ta firma (nie dlatego ze jest najlepsza), dlaczego wlasnie
ten dzial, jesli stypendia to najlepiej tutaj wspomniec o wiedzy teoretycznej,
gdzie sie ja nabylo. Ewentualnie dodatkowe kursy.

3. konkretniej na temat umiejetnosci, ale nie tak ze rzucasz hasla. Od tego jest
cv. W CL masz np opisac doswiadczenei zawodowe. I na podstawie tego co zrobiles
opisac swoje umiejetnosci.

4. wpokazac ze sie jest swiadomym wyzwan jakie niesie ze soba praca, i
nakierowac lekko na zainteresowanie sie czytajacego spotkaniem. Wskazac tez
ewentualne daty, ktore moga nie odpowiadac.

popatrz sobie tam
http://www.bournemouth.ac.uk/careers/CoveringLetters
.html

Pozdrawiam
KK

do góry